Dogs at the beach

  

Dogs at the beach

Imagine you are at the beach watching these dogs. Write to describe that moment in time. Give as many details as you can.

Describe:

• what you see
• what you smell
• what you hear
• what you are thinking as you watch the dogs

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• write in full sentences
• take care with your spelling and punctuation
• give your writing a title if you want to
• check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find

e-asTTle Writing Attitude Questions

Planning space 5ws 5 senses Full sentences

Start writing here:  As i'm sitting on the beach i see two exited and happy dogs bounding past me.

There tails wagging madly as their tongues hang out tasting the salty beach air.

As they splash through the water the waves crash against there bodys pushing them closer and closer to me. With every step they get wetter and wetter while having to jump and dodge rocks and shells that are littered all across the beach. They smell the salty air all around them as they push the waves crashing against them and every now and then shaking the refreshing water of so it doesn't weigh them down. The smell of fish and chips wafts into their nostrils, they think about finding where it's coming from but still do not stop for rest.